eh... I'm not too happy with my version of the Lorax. Iambic pentameter is easier to work with when you start with an un-rhymed, un-matched concept...
I feel like I just attempted to stick a round peg in a square hole.
Lemme know what you think, and if anyone has a better suggestion for either a different story, or a easier approach I would enjoy trying those as well. Send me your thoughts.